I can see what you added as text slides at the beginning about the TV saga in a new season, but you still have not grasped what it was that you were supposed to do, in spite of watching an entire class’s videos. You need text slides that take us through the storyline (you didn’t), identify the theme (you didn’t), and create a cliffhanger (you didn’t). The majority of your video is a way too big list of characters that eat up your time without telling pieces of the story or theme. I’ll add 5 to your score, but I cannot do more than that because you still have not met the requirements as listed in the rubric.
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I can see what you added as text slides at the beginning about the TV saga in a new season, but you still have not grasped what it was that you were supposed to do, in spite of watching an entire class’s videos. You need text slides that take us through the storyline (you didn’t), identify the theme (you didn’t), and create a cliffhanger (you didn’t). The majority of your video is a way too big list of characters that eat up your time without telling pieces of the story or theme. I’ll add 5 to your score, but I cannot do more than that because you still have not met the requirements as listed in the rubric.